Dwell, I Do!
Of all the beautiful memories you remember
Hold them dear, keen to your heart forever
For those you reminiscence but not spare:
‘That I’ll be standing waiting here. . . .’
With last notes, by the oak, your footsteps to hear
Then when they deny you coming once. . . .
Memories of mine would render you wince
Because you know, in the vicinage of your heart, I’m not far
For dwell, I do!
In the midst of your heart
Bound amid chains of deathless love
And nil tainted are they, no dirt . . .
Dwell, I forever do!
Rapturously entangled in your presence
Like the concluding frailty of a seceding snow
Or the center queen of a tribal dance
Dwell, I do!
Of heavenly devotion, and of endless amity
While they spoke of Passion, Amour! Remember me?
Shrouded by melancholia, being on quest for serenity
When clouded was the realms of heaven, and so far you see
With panacea, by the Eden’s door, you found me near
The laurels were in bloom when I healed your wounds
Within my arms, you reclined, as downpour drenched the grounds
In the boulevards of futurity, thus when in pain, know I’m no far…
Here dwell, I do!
In you…….amid the core of your heart
Armored against the curse of coy and decay
My memories would live, as words…..or piece of art
Dwell, I forever do!
As thy keystone of your existence
Like that of an ensuing morning haze
When doleful, with caress, to kiss your face
Dwell, I do!!
Someday, deep down of you
I vow, you would know it’s true:
‘That within me…….you too
Dwell, you do!’
sinorita.bushra@yahoo.com
28/06/10
My stormy love for thee
ReplyDeletedark drifting clouds of troubled torment
come crashing down
windswept hair lashes my face
water falls from crazy eyes
and blinds me to your beauty
dragged down by a heavy heart
in a sad sea of terrible tears
my conscience shivers
and finally disappears
thanx for commenting :) i appreciate it. but erm. . . should i take the poem as a compliment to my work?? or is it just a poem of urs?
ReplyDeletehey1 good work..:D but as for criticism... they say "simplicity can win hearts when it makes sense..:D "
ReplyDeletei prefer simple poems thus i ges i thot that ur one needed it too..nyways keep up the good work..:D:D
thnx taiara ..;) i'll try to make it simpler from now on. :)
Deletebtw i'm glad that u read :D
i dedicate this poem to u...
ReplyDeletethat's nice of you..
Deletethnx :) stay tuned!
O.O Im speechless Bushra I dunno what to say..ITS AWESUMMM And beautiful
ReplyDeletethanx a lot :D i'm very happy that u read :)!!
DeletePurra sheshe eshe purata bucchi :D Awesome jinish :D Very gluey and melodramatic :D
ReplyDelete:D my pleasure Chief !!!
Deletenice poem..loved it...:)
ReplyDeleteReddy
so u finally read it??...hahahaha :P..thanx bucketloads!
Deletethanks for sharing your poem...I really enjoyed it...and it would make a great lyrics for a song!!...:D
ReplyDeletemy pleasure Aleo :D and do stay tuned!
DeleteBeautiful :)
ReplyDeleteAwesome, apu! Thought this was a renowned poet's crearion. Keep up this and you sure can become an amazing poet.
ReplyDeleteawww...thanks a LOT Labib ! :D
DeleteI was suspecting this as one of ur old pieces where ur poems aren't as simple as ur later pieces, and I was right! And I think u previously posted this on fb as NOTE and I commented there. I might be wrong as my memory sucks. :\
ReplyDeleteAnyways, everyone won't apprehend this piece. Honestly, I didn't understand almost the half of it. With pieces of your class, it will be a SIN to give feedback on it without understanding it totally. Consider my point of view; Um a very general reader with a below average vocab and hated Literature in my school life. And I guess this was one of the few pieces (first in this blog, and there were two or three in fb)that I didn't understand fully.
Though I appreciate the effort highly because writers of your class doesn't always have to write pieces for everyone. There are times you write something for yourself.
And you certainly are a better writer now than you were in 2010. You still write these kind of pieces, but at least they are easier to have a grasp on and still give the meaning you want to deliver.
Sorry for the marathon comment :P
WOW !!
Deleteknow what ,bhaiya? this marathon comment actually did me a LOT OF GOOD ! :)
yes you read this poem in facebook too. and thanks for thinking my poems make sense even though you and other readers don't get it ....! i'm consoled!
and yeah,maybe i am giving up my complex thoughts bit by bit...but in 2010 ,i was atleast a "writer"...but in 2012, i am afraid i CAN'T write at all!! ..maybe just wrote one or two poems this year :/
thnx for reading :)
I have waited here for you so long lonesome, and sun only brings me a hope, that across the fence in a place full of colours we can be happy , we can have our wings
ReplyDeletethnx for reading :)
Deleteby the way, is it from a song lyric?